Here's a song of mine... kind of. I completely screwed up on 1:48 to 1:58 in terms of how long i hold the chords for and timing but meh...

When i stop at about 2:02 is where i am going to try and come up with some kind of interlude, probably a clean section before going into the other riff that comes in immediately after 2:02. After the final riff in this recording is probably where there is going to be a guitar solo that goes back to the main riff.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNFxtZZQqHo

Pretty good stuff Steve. Some nice riffing ideas, pretty clean too. Timing is a wee bit out in 1 or 2 places where you are changing from the runs back to the riffs but that's easily rectified. Well played!!! B)